Nala Vamp 1

first try to design a vamp version of the young nala from the lion king musical. i kinda like it^^ the origianl corset has a lot of pearls, but i think i'll just take fabric with a nice texture. it's more easy. and don't ask about those red shoes :3 i just love those shoes.
feel free to tell me what i could change to make the design better. i'm open for critiques!

vamp design (c) me, please don't claim as your own
origianl design (c) dunno, it's from the musical [link]
lines as usual from jelliclecostumes.com

textures: [link] [link]